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Drabble like thingie." Falling"- Adult.
by Araythea (araythea)
at January 17th, 2006 (11:28 pm)
nervous

current mood: nervous
current song: Aqualung - Strange and Beautiful

[Title] Falling
[Author] araythea
[Rating] Adult
[Summary] Falling, to never again gain what was lost.
[Word Count] 230
[Notes] For son_of_darkness for opening such a lovely community. It’s just a super short little thing, but I’ve never written anything quite like this so my complete apologies if it’s crap. I wasn't sure what all would be posted here, I hope this is ok. :)



With breath and teeth He reduced me to nothing. I’m nothing but a quivering mass of needy mortal flesh, pale and silken. It should bloody tendrils that once held wings, but he has even denied me the physical wounds to match the meaty chunks He tore from me, heart and soul. Perfection, perfection ripped away. Fleeting memories of eternal serenity, losing by the second what was rightfully mine to keep.

Sensations overcome me, with a fierceness I’ve never felt. Roiling within me, needing release, but of what? My clumsy fingers trip over parts I’ve never had, long for parts I’ll never have again. My body is heavy like a cloud ready to burst forth and spit rain to the earth as I pull and stretch and grow, fires burning bright within my belly. I keep seeking the fulfillment I lost as sensations become harsher urging me to stop before it consumes me. I can’t stop, not ever. All consuming need blanks my mind as I pull faster urging myself to completion, to anything that feels the gaping hole within me.

I feel like I’m falling apart as I spill my shameful seed onto my hand. For a shining moment I was among the clouds of heaven again, and now I’m falling back to the feeling of emptiness that rises up to meet me and pull me under its black shelter.

Comments

Posted by: jamie2109 (jamie2109)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 11:20 am (UTC)
girly angel

Oh that was lovely. So sad, but so lovely. Thank you for the beautiful read. :)

Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 03:49 pm (UTC)
angels

Thank you so much. :D I am horribly nervous about it.

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Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 03:49 pm (UTC)
angels

*blush* Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Posted by: мichєllє (misread_)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 04:03 pm (UTC)
Bella

*huge lump in throat*

Sweetness, that was...just beautiful.

Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 04:08 pm (UTC)
angels

♥squishes♥ Thank you, love. *kisses*

Posted by: мichєllє (misread_)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 04:12 pm (UTC)
Bella

*sighs contently* You're such a lovely writer, you could never fuck up a story *smiles* Love you hon♥

Posted by: Teh Sodsta (son_of_darkness)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 05:04 pm (UTC)
Angel of Light

Oh, poor angel. :( That was so sad and so beautifully written. I'm really curious as to why he Fell, now.

*hugs you* Thank you so much for writing and posting this here. It was brilliant. ♥
xxx

Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 05:18 pm (UTC)
angels

Thanks, love. ♥ I have quite the angel fetish, I love that you've created this place. XD

*hugs*

Posted by: Willow Dean (drusillas_rain)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 08:00 pm (UTC)

so lovely

Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 18th, 2006 10:24 pm (UTC)
angels

Thank you love. ♥

Posted by: for life is a proscenium stage and... (wearethestars)
Posted at: January 19th, 2006 02:48 am (UTC)
angel formerly known as

It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 21st, 2006 12:08 am (UTC)
angels

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Posted by: Subterranean Homesick Alien (charlotteschaos)
Posted at: January 19th, 2006 05:30 am (UTC)
CHAR!

Lovely!

Posted by: Araythea (araythea)
Posted at: January 21st, 2006 12:09 am (UTC)

Thanks, love. You know me, all description and you know not much of anything else. :P

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